Tuesday, July 13, 2021

The Accidental Ten-Year Time Machine

Honesty is often the policy, so I will be honest here.  I haven't posted in a while - this matters; here's why:  I had trouble logging back into this blog.  

Fact.  Embarrassing, and true.  

But behind a struggle is often a discovery of fascinating proportions.  While trying to recover my login for this blog, I accidentally logged into the blog I had before this one.

And found something really neat.

I actually had forgotten about that previous blog.  And forgotten about these old original posts from when I started out on my writing career.  Now I have found them all; from late 2011 through mid 2012.  For a trip down memory lane, spiraling back a decade, I will post them in order from oldest to newest.

Though...  Again, being honest, who can call any post as old as these new?  

I did not edit these in any way.  They are as they appeared when originally published, even with embarrassing bits and blemishes.

Titles will be underlined and bolded, dates italicized and bolded.

Here we go :)


First Post - 12/29/11 - 3:33am


And so it is that I journey into the world of E-publishing with nothing but hope in one hand and an astonishing amount of ignorance in the other.

Wish me luck!

Sasha : )

 


E-Publishing in a Winter Wonderland - 1/12/12 - 12:21am



So I decided to E-Publish my book. 

 

Let me explain. 

 

Up until nearly a month ago, the plan was to get published via the traditional route. 

 

Here’s a quick overview of the traditional process: 

 

1.  Write the novel

2.  Edit the novel

3.  Edit the novel again

4.  Edit the novel once more

5.  Edit the novel seriously this time

6.  Find an Agent

7.  Agent finds publisher/editor

8.  A deal is secured

9.  18-24 months pass

10.  Your book comes out in hardcover in bookstores

 

Hooray!

 

With this list in my head, I embarked on the journey. 

I wrote the novel.  I finished IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM at about 4am on Friday, June 3rd, 2011.  When looking back over those two months of furious, night and day writing, I tend to cringe.  I have never been so consumed by a project, any project, ever.  I neglected everything and everybody (including myself) in order to breathe life into this idea that I believed in.  And then I was done. 

 

I needed a break.  Originally, I had planned on taking a two week break.  Instead, I took three months.  Why such a long time?  Because I needed such a long time.  Itwoad (as I call it) had taken everything out of me.  There had been blood, there had been sweat, and there had been tears.  And so I couldn’t look at it for three months. 

 

Skip to mid September.  I began editing without further hesitation.  It wasn’t long before I realized just how many edits I needed to make!  To begin with, itwoad was 156,000 words by the time I had finished the rough draft. 

 

156,000 words = 600+ pages 

 

That’s a lot of pages, and way, way too many for my genre, paranormal young adult.  The average title in my genre has about 60,000 thousand words, and from my research it appeared that agents/publishers were looking for even shorter titles. 

 

And so I cut and edited, cut and edited, edited and cut, and cut and edited.  I went through three rounds of editing.  Preliminary edits took about two months, secondary edits took about two weeks, and final edits took about ten days.  All in all, I cut and edited and edited and cut for three months without a break.  By the end of those three months and final edits I had cut 75% of the novel.  156,000 words had been reduced to 41,000 words.  The dirt and rocks had all been washed away, leaving diamonds in their wake. 

 

In other words, it was time to find an agent. 

 

I subscribed to Writer’s Market via an online subscription (coincidentally I just cancelled my account there about three hours ago).  Even though my attempts at finding an agent were not successful, I still highly recommend Writer’s Market.  For about $6 a month you can view online what others pay $65+ for when they buy the book, and the online information is more frequently updated than the book.  (Don’t bother looking for the book at the library, by the way.  Their editions are almost always outdated.)

 

Through Writer’s Market I found the names of about sixty agents that might possibly be interested in representing me.  I took my time to engage in this process, mind.  They say that the process of finding an agent is an entirely separate one from writing the book, and I couldn’t agree more.  As a process, it deserves a certain amount of your concentration and determined effort.  And so I went to each of these sixty agents’ websites and researched them all – thoroughly.    After choosing my twenty or so favorites, I began writing letters.  Even while most of the letters were pretty similar, I tried to include a sentence or two (sometimes a paragraph) addressing the agent specifically and detailing why I thought I would be a good fit for their list. 

 

I should add that I had been writing and editing my query letter for over seven months.  I had started on a whim in early May when I was only about halfway through writing itwoad, but regardless had awoken one morning with a sales pitch in my head.  I began my query right then and I am glad that I did.  Over the course of seven months, my query went through about ten major revisions.  The importance of the query letter cannot be exaggerated.  It is, simply, the single page that will sell your book to a literary agency.  It should only be one page, short, sweet, and perfect.   After seven months mine was pretty good.  I even used a portion of it (slightly reworked) for my description of itwoad at Amazon.

 

On December 12th, 2011, I woke up earlier than usual and prepared to leave the house.  Even though it has been a mild winter, on that morning frost covered the ground.  I grabbed my plastic bag of twenty or so letters and plopped them on the passenger seat of my Hyundai.  Because many of the literary agents had requested partial manuscripts, the bag was heavy and bulky.  I then proceeded to get a brush to clear the frost from my windshield while the letters remained warm inside, cozy in their tidy wrappings.  And then I went to the post office and sent the letters all at once.  I had planned a sendoff en masse, and that’s exactly what I did. 

 

Regardless, and after all that, I was rejected by most of the agents.  Some I have not heard back from and I don’t expect to.  More rejections – or perhaps even an acceptance, may be on the way, but either way I have found something else. 

 

E-publishing – at last I’m climbing aboard. 

 

Skip to December 14th, 2011.  The cover of the USA Today arts page features an article about E-publishing and how it can be lucrative for even non-bestsellers.  An odd time to find such an article, I thought – only two days after I sent off twenty query letters to literary agencies via snail mail.  Regardless, I couldn’t help but read the article.  I still have the article, actually, and have no plans to recycle it anytime soon.  Perhaps in ten years I’ll be happy to have a copy of the page that was the catalyst for my becoming an indie writer, or perhaps I’ll just reread my rejection letters and give them the credit (still have all of those, too).

 

So why am I E-publishing?  Well, it’s not just because I was rejected by multiple literary agents, although I can’t pretend that element hasn’t played a role.  No – the real reason I decided to E-publish is because it’s simply easier for the average writer to make a living at E-publishing then it is by following the traditional route.  Sure, many writers at the top of the traditional publishing industry do just fine, but the average Chaucer should get a chance. 

 

If I have a better chance of making a career out of E-publishing than traditional publishing, then I am going to E-publish.  There – that’s it, that’s my reason.  It’s not complicated. 

 

And so I sent itwoad to my friend Kye (who also happens to be my editor), and he began formatting the novel early in the New Year.  After playing with the programming for a while, he sent me the finished epub file for Ipad and Barnes & Noble’s Nook and the mobi file for Amazon.  After doing some paperwork, going over some copyright stuff, and choosing the price, I sent off the files for review. 


Itwoad should be available for sale on Amazon tomorrow.  The reviewing process for the epub file (for the Nook) will probably take longer. 

 

I did, unsurprisingly, make a huge and embarrassing mistake on both of the files.  You will not believe this.

I forgot to add myself as a contributor!


Wow, Sasha, wow.  There are no words.  After having lived an entire year dedicated to this novel, after conceptualizing it in the winter, writing it in the spring, researching agents in the summer, and editing in the fall – after spending hours and hours every day on this project, AND after remembering to add my editor as a contributor, I somehow forgot to add my name to the file as the author.  Wow, Sasha, wow.

 

Wow.

 

And that will always be how I began my indie publishing career.

 

Ah well – it’s a learning process, I guess.

 

I already fixed the Amazon file and I need to wait for the Nook file to get processed before I can make edits…….and add my name.

 

Despite that kerfuffle (because what can it be called, really?), I’m feeling good about this whole thing.  It’s new, it’s exciting, and I’m ready to do what I love and love what I do.  I feel like playing a certain Nina Simone song right now, but I’ll put that off.  Instead, I think I’ll go downstairs and double check the mail for rejection letters.

          



Dreamdrifter Update - 1/19/12 - 12:30am

 



So as of about thirty minutes ago (and finishing chapter eight), I am at the halfway point of writing DREAMDRIFTER

 

The first thought that comes to me is that I’m glad to be writing again after having lain dormant for half a year.  Sure, I edited (oh did I edit) during those months and I was writing articles for this and that, but in my mind writing means working on my fiction.  And my fiction, at the moment, is the Dreamdrifter series. 

 

DREAMDRIFTER has been a release, and a furious one at that as so much creative energy has been building inside of me, waiting for the day when I could say that itwoad is finished and I can move on to number two. 

 

However, DREAMDRIFTER was largely started on a whim.  I had known that I would write several sequels, but I hadn’t planned on starting for a while – perhaps even for a year or so.  What spurred me was the move to E-publish my book, because all of a sudden I didn’t have that year and a half to two years that I had expected I would have after being signed to a literary agency.  Nope – that was gone, and my book was already out there and needing a buddy. 

 

So that’s why I dove into this endeavor so suddenly.  What may have been difficult, however, has turned out to be enjoyable.  Turns out I had been playing this novel in my head for nearly the entire fall, but on a subconscious level.  I’m finding that the plot, the old conflicts with the old characters, and the new conflicts with the new characters, are all coming to me without having to push too hard. 

 

I’m a fast writer when I get going.  What really slows me down, however, is that I need long breaks in between the get goings.  The breaks can be (and are) used for promotion, editing, editing, more editing, editing because I was really just reading last time, and editing – that kind of thing, so those spans of time are productive.  Either way, though, I just need a break to drink some creative juice so long as it’s not cranberry : (

 

Editing will take a month at the very least, and no that does not include formatting. 

 

Formatting is a whole different animal where I get to look at the demo files, complain about them, look at the demo files, complain about them, glance at the demo files, complain about them, and look at the demo files, and complain about them – repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat, do over, repeat, repeat x 65.   And yes, I have let on to my formatter that I’m lucky that he tolerates me.

 

So all things included, my self-imposed May 1st deadline is a good one.  It’s a week or so more than I need if everything goes right, and that’s as it should be.  If all heckfire breaks loose, then I can always edit my deadline up by my CURRENT PROJECTS headline, and so long as you all (YOU ALL, definition:  the two people following this blog) don’t have good memories it’s safe to say that I’ll be able to get away with it : )

 

On a side note I’m planning on releasing a Dreamdrifter series short.  It’s a story that will take place in the Dreamdrifter world but won’t be connected to what is happening in the books.  You know, to add some interest.  The idea hit me yesterday morning along with a fun plot and a couple of goofy characters.  So I’m looking forward to that, and I’ll probably start writing it after this second novel is a wrap. 

 

Now I’m thinking about all the stuff I have to do.  There’s no end to the list, not that there should be, but regardless there is no end.  Now I feel like making a to-do list. And what, really, is the point of having a blog if you can’t bore people with your to-do lists?  Hey, I had a list in my last post.  Perhaps I should make it a goal to have a list in each post.  Ugh!  Another thing to add to the list:  add lists!

 

Sasha’s to do list:

 

1.      Actually sell books

2.      Finish DREAMDRIFTER

3.      Try some new advert strategies

4.      Sell a couple books

5.      Write Dreamdrifter series short

6.      Books…sell…now!

7.      Upload stuff to smashwords

8.      Sell some books

9.      Conceptualize new stories

10     Think I could scare the people at Amazon into buying my books?


!!!Boogey Woogey!!!

 

 

The Decision - 1/23/12 - 2:38am

 


 

So I decided to lower the price of my eBook.

 

Let me explain.

 

First of all I want to give a shout out to those four people who bought my book for $4.99. 

 

Thank you so much for that support.  Your money was not wasted because I take it to heart.  You guys really spurred my belief in this project, you really did.  (As a side note, I changed the epub file before uploading it to Barnes and Noble again, and so you four have the original, untampered with version.  I shortened some titles to say the least, but you four alone will know what my original titles were ; )

 

But to make a short story shorter, I lowered the price because I had only sold four books.  I sold two on 1/13, one on 1/15, and one on 1/16, and after five straight days of no sales I had to do something.  A good blurb and word of mouth wasn’t doing enough, because in order to get the kind of grassroots sales that word of mouth can generate you actually need to sell some books!  And that’s where I’ve been running into problems. 

 

There’s something I have to say.  Perhaps it belongs to the realm of the total obvious but I’m going to say it anyway.

 

I did not lower the price of this eBook because I don’t think it’s a good book.

 

On the contrary, I lowered the price because I think it IS a good book.

 

The price is now $0.99, down from $4.95.  What that means is that I have to sell about nine books to make the same amount I made with the sale of one book at $4.95.  I’m basically counting on people who like the book to tell their family and friends about it – I’m really hoping for that kind of support, because I will need those numbers to be make anything at $0.99. 

 

To reiterate, though, my goal is to be able to make a living at writing, and a living – for me at least, isn’t much.  I don’t need fancy stuff all over the place.  I don’t feel that pang of dissonance when I see that crooked H in the middle of my steering wheel like I do every single day.  That’s fine, that’s the life I expect to live as a writer and I’m fine with that.  I’m not out to make millions like Amanda Hocking  and who knows who else.  I just want to make something.  Food would be nice…heating in winter too – I hate the cold.

 

So that’s where I’m coming from with this whole thing.

 

Some of you may be wondering why I didn’t lower the price to $2.99 or something in between $4.95 and $0.99.  I do have a reason.  The truth is that I really want a lot of people to read this book.  This novel means a lot to me.  I gave everything I had to give to its creation.  I think it’s a good book and I think there are qualities it possesses that could really benefit any reader.  It’s a fun read, it’s an engrossing read, and it’s a deep read.  There are some seriously dark elements mixed in with the paranormal excitement. 

 

And so I want people to read it.  Many people – like LOTS.  I really want their opinions, I want to read their comments, and those things are hard to gather to your side when you have so few readers.  So in the end the money is important because I want to try and make a living at this, but of course the writing is even MORE important.  And that is why I priced it at the lowest possible price. 

 

I wasn’t planning on posting tonight.  But I really wanted to give those people that had already bought my novel at the more expensive price an explanation for this decision, and – of course, to remind them that I deeply appreciate their initial support.  Not to mention that they alone – those four people, have my original, special file : )

 

Thanks you guys.

 

And I hope this won’t be in vain. 

 

In other words…

 

The rest of you buy my book!

 

 


Dreamdrifter is finished! - 1/29/12 - 5:56pm

 


And not only is the new book finished, but I actually LIKE it.  Liking my own work is never a sure thing and so I don't take it for granted.  A week or two break to defuse from this high and then I will begin editing.  There's always more to do, but I get a breather for the time being.  Later in the week I'll do a post about how the writing process was different for DREAMDRIFTER than itwoad, because it certainly was a different experience.  

 

I can't wait for you to read my new book!

 

And thank you for following my blog : )

 


Exciting News! 1/31/12 - 9:23pm

 


IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM will very shortly be available in paperback through Lulu!  Thank you for all your help, Kye.  A round of applause for my editor!  Now all I have to do is review the demo copy which has only just shipped, offer my approval if it's in order and my changes if it's not, and then we're all set!  I’ll post a status update when it's available : )


Also, I've just uploaded the novel to Smashwords.  So it's now available for Sony as well as Apple products such as the iPad and iPhone.  

 


A Different Kind of Perfect - 2/5/12 - 11:41am

 


I have enjoyed a full week since finishing DREAMDRIFTER.  While many revelations about this work have yet to come to me, a few have already arrived.  Earlier in the week I promised a post comparing DREAMDRIFTER to IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM, and I’m going to take some time now and do just that.

 

I’m just going to say it as I see things.

 

I wrote IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM for New York. 

 

Each word, sentence, paragraph, page, and chapter manifested within me with the knowledge that they would – together as a whole, be faced with the most critical eyes the written word has ever had to confront in the history of our world. 

 

I’m not exaggerating when I say that, for it is harder now to get published then it has ever been.  The average literacy agency in New York City accepts less than 1% of the material that is submitted to their agents.  It’s TOUGH to get published.  The fallback is to reject almost everything, and my own novel – despite my independent endeavors toward perfection, found itself without a home.  And so I gave it one.  But I’ve already talked about that 
(see E-Publishing in a Winter Wonderland).

 

My point is that I was striving for perfection with itwoad.  Here’s the thing though:  I wasn’t striving for perfection in my eyes, but theirs – the eyes of the lit agencies and in doing so I to some extent voluntarily endorsed the derailing of my own style.  Don’t misunderstand though – itwoad is all me and my heart remains in those pages, but the overall style of the novel is more preened and clipped than is my usual splash of words. 

 

Itwoad may very well be a better novel for the concessions I made to please others.  I have never been a successful judge of my own work, and I’m not about to succeed in attempting what will probably be another failure.  I can’t know if itwoad is better, but I know that I wrote it differently than the new book.

 

DREAMDRIFTER, on the other hand, is a liberated novel.  While itwoad was constrained because I wrote it (and edited it, for that matter) with the knowledge that agencies would be viewing the material, DREAMDRIFTER was reversibly unconstrained because I knew those same agencies would not be viewing the material.  I had found E-publishing by the time – actually immediately before, I wrote the new book and so I was free. 

 

The style could flow without the inhibition of the harshest of eyes upon the ink of its words, flattening its grace. 

 

I didn’t have to worry about my editor or agent saying things like “Oh…Annie and Ash fight a lot in this book?  I’m not sure that’s the best idea – sales, you know.  People want tulips and roses.  More tulips and roses, Sasha, and we’re golden!  Nip along now and make those changes, please and thank you!  I’m so glad we could meet today to have this pleasant discourse and exchange of good ideas.  Tulips and roses!  OK, bye now!”

 

I in no way regret not having that conversation.

 

DREAMDRIFTER is perhaps a tad darker than itwoad.  And despite the hormone injections of its teenaged beginning itwoad – in my opinion at least, is not a novel for the faint of heart.  The conscious mind is forced into the subconscious world, and what it witnesses there is disturbing even to the more adventurous of souls.  There’s even more Dreamdrifting in DREAMDRIFTER as might be expected, and the subconscious minds of new people will take some darkly devious turns. 

 

I should take a moment to talk up E-publishing again, because that truly is one of the best things about it.  You’re your own agent, editor, marketer, and publisher.  All of those titles alongside author may be too many sometimes – especially marketer L, but at the same time you’re unencumbered by the limitations of others.  It’s amazing how many authors who do have representation are not pleased with it, or perhaps they have a good agent but a horrible marketing team.  Few of us have it perfect.  But at least this way I get to mean what I say and say what I mean.  I refuse to pull a punch.

 

DREAMDRIFTER remains injected with every whim I manifested during its creation.  There was no dark corridor which – once confronted with its looming threshold, I did not enter to find the illumination of darkness.  I did not cower in the daylight of the pre-approved prose, nor did I worry too much about my readers.  I am very grateful for all and any who are either reading this post or my book or both, but I can only consider so many objectives at once.  The satisfaction of the novel with itself is the most important objective, followed with my own and everyone else’s satisfaction with it. 

 

In short, DREAMDRIFTER is my style liberated. 

 

The style of my writing, however, was not the only element to separate the novel from its sequel. There were many factors that changed, and I’m glad to say that most of them were positive. 

 

Perhaps the largest and best change was that I able to breathe while writing.  To not fear that the project you’ve worked on for a year will be rejected in a half second really relaxes a writer, and that much I enjoyed immensely.  While I wrote itwoad with the possibility in the back of my brain that nobody would read it, I wrote DREAMDRIFTER with the knowledge that people would read it.  At least a couple.  I’m not kidding myself – I’m no Amanda Hocking J.  So that knowledge really spurred me in a good way.  I was bolstered by the fact that my work would not become a complete waste of energy should every agency reject it outright. 

 

Another positive change was that I wrote in a healthier manner.  I paced myself through the pages.  I didn’t hurry or rush, although I didn’t let the slack run through my hands either.  My schedule was more flexible than it had been when writing itwoad, and on random days I would just decide I needed a break and clock out.  A big part of being a writer is knowing when to take breaks.  If you’re on a roll than don’t stop, because your momentum may never find itself again, but if you’re stalled than a break is a good idea.  Perhaps this is all common sense, but I’ve surprised myself at times, and that’s not to mention how often the world surprises me in illustrating that words and phrases are also casual jokers.  Common sense is not common, and neither is common law (fun fact:  civil law is the most common legal system in the world).

 

In conclusion, I like my new novel. 

 

It’s unconventionally dark and darkly unconventional, visceral in its attempts to capture the ongoing experiences of my characters, and eclectic in the shimmering possibilities of the subconscious mind.  I was glad to write freely once again.  Itwoad had to be what it was – I had to try to get published via the traditional route, but this new course is better and finding a happier place within me.

 

I had to understand what perfection meant to literary agencies before I could understand my own, different kind of perfection.  My perfection is realized in not needing to realize perfection.  I at last understand that concept, because so often it’s the kinks we’ll remember.  

 


Today is a Special Day - 2/12/12 - 10:14pm

 


So today is a special day.

 

Let me explain.

 

It has been exactly two months since my fateful journey to the post office to deliver my twenty or so query letters to their messenger.  On that day, December 12th of last year, I surprised myself by not being wracked with the nerves that I've read so much about – the kind that trespass upon your consciousness as you approach the post office to send off your tireless work.  
In fact, I was in a very calm place that day. 

 

After I sent off the letters, I drove to the local Barnes and Noble (used to work there, actually) and browsed the shelves of books, seeking the section where I hoped my own would find itself before long.  I wasn’t late on my research – I had been to the bookstore to investigate my genre many times before, but that time it was more of an honorary enterprise.  I allowed myself a breather in the same place I soon hoped to occupy.

 

This is neither an assault on modesty nor an exaggeration of truth, but to be entirely frank I really believed that the literary agencies would want to publish IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM.  In my last post I detailed some of the ways in which I tried to ensure their interest in my work (see A Different Kind of Perfection), but those weren’t the sole reasons I believed I would make it.  I had fallen in love with my own story – a rare occurrence, for my heart hasn’t always found a home amid the stacks of my own pages.  Itwoad (my pet name for IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM) was and is quite simply the most realized story I have ever created. 

 

As writers, we have visions.  That – I’m afraid, is the easy part.  The hard part is trying to capture those visions on the page, curving the ink of our letters into words and sentences until meaning splashes the eyes of a vagabond reader.  Sometimes we do a great job of capturing a vision.  Sometimes we don’t.  Only the writer can truly know, and perhaps not all are truthful in saying whether they have done so or not. 

 

I did it with itwoad.  I truly did, and I – in my only mildly veiled naivety, thought an agent may have picked up on that fact while reading my synopsis and sample pages. For the record, I worked like a dog on both, and don’t even get me started on the query letter (worked on that for seven months).

 

I’m not proud to say this, but I was waiting for the phone call. 

 

For you folks who are lucky enough to have had the power to wrestle your orientations away from the publishing industry, a simple way to put it would be that if you get a phone call you’re golden.  You have an agent if they call you – you just do.  Lucky bastard : )  I was hoping that I – like Lisa McMann and Karsten Knight before me, would get a call within the week or two following my query sendoff only to be informed that I had landed a literary agent. 

 

Well, you know what happened.  And if you don’t, see E-Publishing in a Winter Wonderland.

 

I can’t believe it’s been two months since that day.  So much has happened, and most of it – I’m glad to say, has been pretty awesome.  For one thing, for all intensive purposes I am published.  True, there’s no massive advance when you E-Publish, but as those who are keeping up with the traditional publishing industry know, there wouldn’t have been a massive advance the other way either. 

 

Now my only goal is to reach readers.  Some will love the book, some will hate it, and hopefully those who hate it will leave their tomato guns at home.  But no matter whether people like itwoad or not, people will be reading it and that was my objective all along.  You’re a writer out there if you believe this is true:  the worst fear of the writer isn’t that we won’t make money, but that nobody will ever read our work. 

 

It’s as simple as that.

 

And people are reading my work!  Yay!

 

I realized the other day that I’m only checking my sales out of habit.  As of right now, the series will be unaffected by massive sales or none – either way I WILL finish the series.  That revelation belongs to the realm of fact.  The Dreamdrifter series will be finished, and no dissonant editor or wayward publisher can stop me now. 

 

Two months doesn’t seem like a long time, but oh it has been.  So much has happened since December 12th, for back then my ignorance of the E-Publishing world was nothing less than complete.  To illustrate how little I knew about the world of online publishing, if somebody had told me on the 12th that I’d be published in two months I’d have guessed they meant traditionally published.  No alternative would have occurred to me.

 

Since then I’ve learned a lot and self published.  Stuff’s good, and while sales aren’t crazy right now I’m still selling books at a trickle, and I don’t take that for granted.  If you’re reading this and you read my book, I would like to thank you.  I really hope you liked it, and number two is even better.

 

Besides its having been two months since my menagerie of query letters was released, another milestone will soon be met.  And no, I don’t mean my birthday this Tuesday (Valentine’s Day!).  Here’s the thing: most agencies give you a window of anywhere from two weeks to two months where you can expect a response.  So – as it happens, I should really not be expecting any more query letter replies.  That doesn’t mean they won’t come, of course, but I shouldn’t expect any.  That is significant to me.  The death knell of my traditional publishing career has been sounded, it seems.

 

Regardless, I feel very calm.  The fact is that I have had occasion to wonder whether I leapt into E-Publishing too fast.  I first uploaded itwoad onto Amazon around January 12th – only a month after sending my letters.  Now, however, another month has passed and it seems that my actions toward haste were not misled. 

 

There is only one more twist in this story…I think. 

 

Of the twenty or so letters I sent out, I – like many would be authors – had a few high hopes.  One was Jodi Reamer at Writer’s House (the agency that worked on Twilight), and another was Mary Kole at Kidlit (the agency that worked on Wildefire), but they both turned down itwoad.  As a side note, let me say that I truly deserved the rejection from Mary Kole.  Again, the ‘replace’ button screwed me over, leaving my query rife with typos.  

 

So no hard feelings, Mary, honest.  

 

But the agent and agency I wanted most I have yet to hear back from!

 

Rachel Stout at Dystel & Goderich has yet to respond with a rejection.

 

True, query letters often get lost and discarded.  I said in a previous post that the average agency accepts less than 1% of the submissions they receive, and honestly I think I was rounding up there – like, a lot.  So we’ll see – maybe I’ll get a rejection, maybe I won’t.  I don’t mean to ramble on about this, but – to put it most simply, I’ve kind of been waiting for a response from Rachel.  And here’s why:

 

I had set up a mental roadblock.  The rejection from Dystel was going to signal the end of my traditional publishing career.

 

But here I am – still waiting.  And it’s been two months.  I recall that Rachel’s packet was one of the larger ones.  It definitely had the synopsis, and – if my memory serves me, at least one sample chapter along with the query letter and maybe the author biography, too.

 

I will keep you updated.  Don’t worry – if she responds you’ll know.

 

I still have all of my rejections as it happens.  I don’t ever want to lose them.  I’m thinking I might someday do some kind of collage or something.  Nothing with papier-mâché though.  I hate papier-mâché! 

 


Published in Paperback! - 2/27/12 - 7:03pm

 


As of a millisecond ago IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM is available in paperback!  You can buy it right now at Lulu or wait for it to appear at Amazon which might take a day or two.  A shout out to my editor, Kye - thank you!  I'd be upriver without a boat if I didn't have you : )

 

Buy IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM in paperback at Lulu.

 


My Traditional Publishing Career is Over - 3/16/12 - 12:15pm



So it appears that my traditional publishing career is over.

 

As of today is has been exactly three months and four days since my journey to the post office to deliver my query letters.  A month or so ago, I did a post about those letters and the agents that had rejected me as well as those I had yet to hear back from.  I talked about how I was still waiting for a response from Rachel Stout at Dystel and Goderich.  Well, after three months and four days I’m willing to write that off as a no go.  I’m an inde now, and I couldn’t ask for better :)

 

Reference:  Today is a Special Day



Well of Course it Happened Now That I Said it Wouldn't - 3/26/12 - 11:42pm


 

Guess what I got in the mail today? 

 

Yup, a much belated reply from Rachel Stout at Dystel and Goderich.  You’ve probably already guessed it – they passed on the project.  I wasn’t that surprised.  More relieved, really – glad to have finally received a response from them.  Beforehand I had been able to entertain the notion that perhaps my letter had gotten lost – trapped in the postal cycle, fallen like a leaf beneath the mail truck only to find the flame of obscurity.

 

None of that happened. 

 

How bizarre to get a response three months and fifteen days after sending off the query.  None of the agency websites and/or magazines I perused hinted that the wait would or could be so long.  But I am glad to have been rejected, in a strange way.  What I said in my last post holds true.  My traditional publishing career, for better or worse, does seem finished now.  This sense of finality is simultaneously confirming and devastating.  Perhaps, subconsciously of course, I was holding onto that string of hope that was that last letter.  Well, it has arrived and so has my realization that I am truly an inde writer now. 

 

Soon (after a bit more processing of all of this) I’ll do a post on rejections – on getting rejections and not getting down because of rejections.  I’ll keep ya posted.

If this is all crazy confusing check out My Traditional Publishing Career is Over.  

 


On Rejections - 4/13/12 - 3:06pm

 


So I’ve been rejected – like, a lot.

 

Let me explain.

 

Well, it all started about four months ago (four months ago yesterday, to be exact) when I got out of bed and readied myself to depart the house.  Off I went to the post office to deliver my twenty some query letters to their proper homes, namely the mail slots of publishers and agencies the nation over who might have found my manuscript a diamond of interest among the avalanche of debris they normally have to fight through on a daily basis, shield in hand.  It’s fair to say that in regard to accumulating my respectable pile of rejection letters, submitting anything at all to anybody was my first enormous blunder.  Indeed, a great way to not be rejected is to never submit anything in the first place.  It feels great to not be rejected.  Well – that’s what I’m told, anyway.  I wouldn’t know. 

 

In fact – to go back even further, my first in a long series of mistakes that led to my many rejections was to write anything in the first place.  Had I never written my novel I would never have had the supreme audacity of living consciousness to think that it’s many, worn pages – from all the editing, see – deserved the flickering grace of another’s eyes over its existence.  But I did write the novel. So…my bad.

 

And that brings me to the more recent present.

 

To make a long story only slightly less long, they rejected IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM.  By they I mean ALL of them.  ALL of the literary agencies.  To illustrate the concept in mathematical terms, imagine if everybody except one person rejected the book.  And then that one person also rejected it.  That’s about as arithmetic oriented as I am capable of becoming on a Friday morning. 

 

In conclusion, they ALL rejected the novel.

 

As taxingly redundant as I’m sure that last sentence seems, it is very crucial regardless. Many writers would have said it differently.  Speaking or writing the sentence “They all rejected the novel” differently can have disastrous consequences.  Many writers would have written it as follows:  “They all rejected me.” 

 

No matter the writer in question, the last word in each of the two sentences is immediately telling and revealing of the author’s psyche.  Writing that they “rejected the novel” over “they rejected me” illustrates a patient wisdom on the part of the writer.  Consequently, writing that “they rejected me” over “they rejected the novel” illustrates an amateur’s approach on the part of the writer, unfortunately. 

 

We live in a cruel world. 

 

There – it’s said.  I didn’t really want to say that, but this is a post about rejections so all of a sudden I got this lingering feeling that if I didn’t write it the blog police would come around to my doorstep and prove the fact.

 

The takeaway here is to understand that when you get a rejection, they are rejecting your work – not you.  The distinction is at once unabashedly simple and simultaneously devastating to those writers who traverse the waters of the literary world unaware of its truthful syllables.  Many writers fall into the trap of confusing their work with themselves.  True, the mistake is easy to make.  After all – after you’ve poured your heart and soul into your work, after you’ve sweated for it, after you’ve cried for it, and after you’ve bled precious blood for it, how can you not see yourself within the inky loops of its bound pages? 

 

The quicksand of this illusion is both fast and invisible to the casual observer.

 

The trick is to develop what amounts to a duality of self.  Yes, you are a writer and yes – undeniably, you live within your work.  That immortality mustn’t fade to brace the rainy storms of practically.  Regardless, you must set your work free – and doing that, equally undeniably, requires a certain detachment. 

 

Do not view your writing as yourself.  Rather, view your writing as your child. 

 

Where lies the difference, you ask?  Well that’s a fine question and a fine question is deserving of a fine answer.  Whereas the self is always attached (no offense meant to my schizophrenic readers), the child –once cared for equally as much and indeed more so than the self at certain times during its life, is eventually set free.  The child – your child, will wonder the world of experience as a separate consciousness.  He will find the love and beauty of life along with the darker aspects, including hate and – yes, you guessed it – rejection.  You cannot protect your child from this fate.  You cannot shield him forever.  The same goes for your novel.  Once released, it is a separate being that must find its own way.  Your child, your novel – both must go free. 

 

When your child gets rejected, do you cry?  Well, maybe you do the first time.  But the second time around you give him tough love – you tell him to keep trying, you tell him that persistence counts even in the screwed up mess that amounts to our world.  Likewise, you should have the same conversation with yourself when rejections come your way.  Enough tears, buck up for the grace of your coming dawns.

 

In a sentence, reject the rejections.

 

I am about to completely contradict myself.  This is a fact because, well – I actually didn’t do any of that.  After my mail truck full of rejections from literary agencies arrived only to dump its entire contents on my living room floor, I actually just said %#$@ it and went independent on their asses.  So rather than take the persistence route – which would have meant many, many more query letters, I retreated to the shade of solace in the inde publishing world.  Instead of retrenching to fight the poison gas of their rejection letters (no bug mask, mind), I left entirely to sprout elsewhere like a prickly and tenacious shrub. 

 

So things are going well.

 

Although sales are not great. 

 

Perhaps I should add a few bullet points to the blank page that is my current marketing strategy. 

 

In conclusion, rejection letters suck.  If you’re a writer with any ambition whatsoever, chances are you’ll be getting a few.  The key to success doesn’t lie in not getting rejection letters, but rather in not getting down because of rejection letters.  Always remember that they are rejecting your work, not you!  Your novel is your child, not you.  And you can’t protect either from a few rejections.

 

Don’t believe me?

 

Wait for the prom.

 


Excerpt:  COLOR MY CATCHER - 4/24/12 - 11:11pm

 


Here's an excerpt from my upcoming Dreamdrifter series short COLOR MY CATCHER.  It has gone through one round of edits and has three to go, so don't mind the odd typo.  Better yet tell me about it.  My email address is lower on the page on the right side.  COLOR MY CATCHER will be available (for free) on May 1st.  

 

Excerpt:  COLOR MY CATCHER

 

They turned onto Roland Avenue.  Here streetlamps sprouted from the pavement like trees and eyes were besieged by shop windows, their interior menageries aflutter with still objects.  The chairs and stilt legged menus of outdoor cafés created the necessity for detours here and there.  Mail boxes and tied up bikes cluttered the sidewalk still further, inspiring the two girls to cross the street.

            “We’re getting close, aren’t we?”  Mary asked.

            Sarah nodded.

            “I love Hampden in the summer,” Mary remarked.  “It’s so distracting.”

            Sarah didn’t respond.  Nerves were beginning to eat away at her resolve, casting her decisiveness into the wind.  She swallowed loudly and then slowed her pace beside her friend, her thoughts clawing at excuses.  Mary, however, was walking downwind of her and knew exactly what was happening.

            “Relax,” Mary instructed.  “This will go fine.”

            “What if it doesn’t, though?”  Sarah asked.  “Huh?  What then?” 

            Mary shrugged.  “Tomorrow is another day, and rumor has it another one will follow after that.  For once just let it go.  Just let him go.  I can’t even begin to imagine how exhausted you must be all the time.  It has got to be tiring to be bound to your emotions twenty four seven.  You seriously need to have a laugh.  And that’s why we’re here.”

           A block later Mary stopped to buy a newspaper from a street vendor, and a block after that they slowed their pace as four eyes traversed the surroundings before meeting the dirty windows of a shop across the street.  A neon sign glowed intact and alive high in the window, but the O had burnt out so that it read PEN.  No other signs of life stirred therein, no vagabond soul came in or out.  All remained unknown.

            “I can’t,” Sarah blurted.  “I can’t do this.”

            “Yes, you can,” Mary propped.  “Get a hold of yourself.”

            “It’s been two months,” Sarah continued.  “I can’t face him again – not now.” 

            Mary nodded.  “Exactly – it’s been two months and you still have no clue what you did wrong.  Here’s your chance to find out.  And you’ll get some revenge while you’re at it.  Come on, Sarah – I should be studying for my Native Initiatives exam.  Don’t bag on me now – now that we’re here!” 

            “Crazy,” Sarah said.  “This is crazy, but I guess I don’t have a choice.”

            “No choice,” Mary said.  “This is peer pressure and no mistake.”

            “Ugh!”  Sarah exclaimed. 

And she crossed the street first, leaving Mary to hurry in her wake.  Mary, the burgundy polish of her nails finding the top of her spandex mini skirt, hoisted it higher as she jaywalked behind her friend.  Sarah, her courage fit to snap, was about to charge into the shop when Mary pulled her off to one side, her movements swift.

“Wait!”  Mary said hurriedly.  “Let’s spy on him first.” 

“You and your games,” Sarah snorted, but she waited patiently as Mary unfolded the newspaper only to hide behind it as she proceeded to peek through the window.  Sarah tried to copy her technique, but quickly gave up as soon as she realized what amateurs they truly were.  Rolling her eyes before allowing them to fall to the headline, Sarah clucked her tongue.  “How is Glasnost coming, anyway?”
            “Shut up!”  Mary hissed.  “I’m trying to see in.  There’s too much glare on the window!”

“Let’s just go in,” Sarah begged.  “This is painful enough without prolonging it.” 

To Sarah’s surprise, Mary obliged immediately.  “Okay then, but you better play along like we discussed before.  Have the script down?” 

“Yeah, yeah – I got it down,” Sarah said, annoyed. 

Tossing the newspaper into a nearby receptacle, Mary made for the door of the shop.  Sarah followed closely behind, her dread entire.  Just when she was about to push open the door, however, Mary swiped her sunglasses from her face before turning around to meet her friend’s gaze with naked eyes.

“Are we bad?”  Mary asked. 

“Oh Mary,” Sarah said.  “Not here.” 

“I said,” Mary said.  “Are we bad?”

Sarah sighed.  “Yes.”

“How bad?”  Mary pushed.

“We’re just bad, okay?”  Sarah said.

Mary shook her head.  “How bad?”

“Fine!”  Sarah exclaimed.  “We’re really bad.” 

“Sorry,” Mary said.  “I didn’t hear you.  How bad?”

Finally, Sarah allowed herself a small smile.  “Really, really bad.”

Mary returned her smile.  And then she turned around and pushed the shop door open.  The space of the parlor’s interior was lit by the window that peered onto the street from inside, its wide frame yielding to the sun.  Apart from what came in from out, however, very little color permeated the room.  The walls were depressingly bare and the furniture, pretentiously square and painfully bland, wasn’t helping either. 

Regardless, Sarah’s eyes were not finding distraction in the surrounding austerity.  Rather, they were already fastened on the man that had just arisen from his own tattoo chair, his small eyes darting from defiant to nervous face.  Sarah felt disconcerted, for despite her passionate months with him she could not tell whether surprise was among the emotions dripping from his pores as his features twisted from a sneer to a smile.

 


Color My Catcher - 5/2/12 - 12:25am


 

COLOR MY CATCHER is available at Smashwords.  It is free and will remain free.  I’m hoping people will read it and get acquainted with my writing style.  A bit later the short story should appear in the Barnes & Noble store for the Nook, at Amazon for the Kindle, and at iTunes for the iPad.  My apologies for those delays – none should take more than a couple days.  I didn’t realize before today that you actually can’t make a story (or novel) free through Barnes & Noble or Amazon directly.  They require the minimum price to get the minimum royalty.  So the only way to get a free story into those stores is to diffuse it through the Smashwords store, because you CAN make a story free there.  It’s silly – I know, as well as annoying from my angle.  Just to be clear, the story IS immediately available through Smashwords and you can get it in any format you like, whether it be PDF, RTF, epub, mobi, or doc/docx.  It’s just taking longer to actually appear in those select stores.

 

 

In any case, I hope you like it : )


Here's a short description:

Sarah is ready for revenge.  Her ex-boyfriend is a tattoo artist and a real rear end.  Teaming up with Mary, her Dreamdrifter friend, Sarah embarks on a journey to reclaim herself in this 5,000 word short story.


DREAMDRIFTER IS HERE! (and except) - 5/6/12 - 8:06pm

 


DREAMDRIFTER is here at last!  It’s available at Smashwords as of about thirty seconds ago.  The epub for Barnes & Noble and the mobi file for Amazon will be available later tonight.  For now here’s an excerpt.  Enjoy!

 

 

Excerpt:  DREAMDRIFTER

 

 

Adia Arrowheart stared me down from across the table, her long nails turning a napkin to mush in the hand not grasping a coffee mug.  Adia’s body was tensed, but not in fear.  Instead, she was poised to strike me down.

            “You’re the Newcomer,” Adia said.

            I nodded.  “I know that.”

            “No,” Adia replied.  “You don’t.  You have no idea, Annie McGallagher.”  Frustration was boiling in Adia, turning her usually gorgeous features into a collage of tinted dissonance.  “You are running from yourself!”

            My hair was long now.  The pixie cut of my teenage self was lost to the fog of years while my longer, styled self shone through like a lighthouse reeling in a ship from a dark and wintry sea.  But my hair was not the only thing that had changed.  In my early twenties I had belatedly began to wear makeup and around the same time I had started wearing fashionable clothes.  I was older, more confident, fatter, and happier than I had ever been in my life. 

            “You see this,” I said, gesturing to the dreamcatcher earth tattooed on my chest.  “This means that I don’t have to listen to you anymore, Adia.  You aren’t my teacher anymore.  I’m a Dreamdrifter now.  Too many unhappy years led to these happy ones and you won’t disrupt my path.”

            “I am trying to illuminate your path!”  Adia hissed. 

            I shook my head.  “You don’t care about me, Adia.  If you did care, then you would never have helped Ash to infiltrate my subconscious mind.  Why should I listen to you at all?  If you were at least being honest then I could –”

            “I am being honest!”  Adia said.  “Your success is mine!”

            “That’s true,” I agreed.  “But not for the reasons you think.  This has nothing to do with me, Adia.  It has only to do with you.  You want your prophecy to not be a failure.  You want that success only for yourself!” 

            She leaned back in her chair, her eyes never leaving mine.  We stared at each other for a moment.  And then, at the exact same moment, we both sampled our drinks.  My medium blend coffee was only lukewarm.  On top of that, the café had been out of my favored dark roast – as if my day needed any more tension.

            “You’re right,” Adia admitted.  “But not completely.  I want you to succeed so that my prophecy will succeed – you’re right about that.  But this is not just about me.  It’s about my parents and the Wildecore parents, and the others that gave their lives so that the Newcomer would survive.  This is for the heroes of the Second Great Manifestation, Annie, and nobody else.”

            Our eyes met over our drinks.  “You were wrong in the beginning,” I said, the accusatory note leaving my voice at exactly the wrong moment.  “You said my brother was the Newcomer.  He is not the Newcomer.  I am the Newcomer.”

            “I know that!”  Adia defended.  “Or – now, I know that.  So I misinterpreted a prophecy.  I was positive, at the time, that your brother had been the Newcomer.  Fine, I was wrong.  That hardly casts the entire thing into irrelevance, Annie.  You still have that destiny to live up to as far as I’m concerned.”

            “Maybe,” I allowed.  “But the question now isn’t about what I have to live up to.  The question now is whether I even want to be the Newcomer, and, more importantly, why I should give a damn about your concerns.”

            Adia held her breath.  I could see what was happening.  It was all too obvious.  My words had inflated her and now she was trying very hard not to burst. 

People like Adia and my parents – academic types, hate more than anything to have their opinions disregarded.  And so it was amusing to see Dr. Adia Arrowheart, the psychologist with expertise in clinical depression, on the cusp of reverie and yet smacked down by the weight of my mature, unflinching confidence.  

“You will not tell me where to go,” I said quietly, leaning forward in my chair as I did.  “You will not tell me what to do.  Those days are gone, dispatched like history not worth remembering.”

“But –” Adia began.

But you can’t,” I hijacked.  “You can’t ruin my happiness, Adia.  You already tried once, remember?  You chose me – you targeted me, and attempted to force the love of my life into my subconscious mind involuntarily.  And oh how you wish he had succeeded,” I continued devilishly, pressing further.  “How you wish Ash hadn’t failed, how you wish we hadn’t fallen in love. He did, however, succeed in making you a failure!”

            Was I being a bitch?  Probably.  But then again I hadn’t seen Adia in twelve years.  Along with the years disgust had grown inside of me, disgust for everything Adia was and had been.  Given the treatment I had received from her in my formative years, it was fair to say that I was going easy on her.  And, in true fashion, here she was calling me a failure.

            “You’re a failure,” Adia said.  “You carry within your soul a gift of the ages – the ability to bring peace to our world as the Newcomer, and yet you choose to cast your gift into the sea of indifference like the hopes of so many saints.”

            “I –” I began.

            “get to talk now,” Adia hijacked.  “You’ve had your turn.”

            “Fine,” I quickly allowed.  If she was going to insist on steering the conversation, she would at least have to drive under my green light. 

            Adia gazed out of the window by our table, her eyes hovering for a moment on the illuminated café sign.  “You attack me unprovoked,” she began, her eyes still dislodged.  “You say I chose you, but you are choosing to blame me for every hardship you have ever encountered.  That is your choice, not a fact.  True, my actions have played an enormous role in your life, but if you began taking a larger role in your own life then maybe mine would seem less significant.  Annie, I have never wanted anything but good things for you.”

            I shook my head.  “You mean you have never wanted anything but good things for you, only in this case it’s the same difference.”

            We engaged in a standoff, choosing to sip our drinks.  My coffee had gone cold.  The café surrounding our spot was buzzing with activity.  Luckily my eyes could easily find distraction amid the passersby.

            “Why do you hate me, Annie?”  Adia asked.

            I replaced my mug on the table.  “Because you’ve attempted over and over to ruin everything good in my life.”

            “You’re lying,” Adia said.  “And I know you’re lying.  That’s not the real reason.”

            I crossed my arms.  “How do you know?”

            “Because you were once my student,” Adia began.  “Remember?  All those years ago.  Before life got serious.”

            “You’re already wrong,” I cut across.  “I was miserable then.  Life was serious.” 

            “Beside the point,” Adia deemed.  “The point is that you’ve hated me from the very first class onward.  You even called me out in that second class, remember?  I wasn’t expecting you to retort.  I wasn’t expecting a wildcard of a Newcomer.”

            A very involuntary smile broke across my features.  “I remember.  I even surprised myself that day.  And Ash was skipping, making it pointless.”

            “Not quite pointless,” Adia said.  “We’re talking about it now, aren’t we?”

            The smile died on my face.  “No, we’re talking about why I hate you.”

            “Not why but when,” Adia corrected.  “And the answer is always.  You have always hated me, and therefore your hate is perhaps questionable at best as no single event stands behind it.  This isn’t personal, Annie – this about universal salvation.   How can you be so selfish?  How can you?” 

            For the first time since sitting down with Adia, real anger was starting to pulse in my veins.  Up until this moment Adia had been annoying me, but it had been an almost fond kind of annoyance as I remembered my former self while simultaneously dissing Adia into oblivion as I had promised myself I would.  Now, however, she was crossing lines.  Calling me selfish was the catalyst. 

            “And where, exactly,” I began, cutting from a different angle.  “Have you been for the last twelve years?  Waiting for your moral compass to reboot so that you might perhaps remember your own overly important role in universal salvation?  Or were you too embarrassed after having screwed up the prophecy?”

            “You –” Adia began.

            “I’m glad,” I interrupted.  “That you and your brother never returned to the Holurn after that night – glad that both of you never came back.  My life has improved tremendously since you’ve left it.  I’m glad –”

            “He’s Holan,” Adia interrupted, brushing her long, braided hair back over her shoulder.  “Todd’s Holan.  He’s founded a new Holurn.”

            “I –” But the words stalled in my throat, caught as they were by surprise.  Todd Arrowheart, the sweet boy from my youth, a Holan?  It just didn’t seem right somehow.  He had always been so…not a Holan.

            “Todd and I have grown apart,” Adia admitted quietly, her tone lilting for the first time.  “He was furious after that night.  Furious at the Holan and Ash for allowing what he sees as your abuse, and even more furious at me for sponsoring it.  We still talk, occasionally.  But his days of looking up to me, like yours, Annie, are apparently over.”

            For a second I hesitated, but only for a second.  “You’re a psychologist,” I said dismissively.  “What does Freud say about karma?”

            Adia buried her head in her hands.  Soon, however, I realized that her movements were born of exasperation rather than sorrow.  “Will you ever stop pretending?”  Adia began, freeing her face.  “That you have anything to lose!”

            “I have everything to lose!”  I exclaimed, gesturing outward.  “Everything!  I have Ash!  I have Alexi!  I have my work and my happiness!  You, Adia, are the one who has nothing to lose!  You’re estranged from your brother, your husband, your former student, and your entire Holurn,” I added cruelly.  “You’re at the end of the line, Adia.  You go off and save the world if you want to so badly.” 

            Adia stared at me, my words barely touching her features, still stunning even as they fought against the years.  Her expression was blank.  “You’re right,” Adia said.  “You’re right, Annie.  Except where you’re wrong!”

            “And where’s that?”  I asked.  “That is, if you care to be so candid?”
            Adia’s eyes receded in surrender.  “You’re right,” she said.  “I haven’t much to lose.  And you’re right that those things in my life have passed me by.  But I’m not finished.  I’m not dead yet.  I have one thing left.  Know what it is?”

            I shook my head.

            “You,” Adia murmured.  “I have you along with my last prophecy, the Newcomer prophecy.  Together they are salvation – salvation for the world, and salvation for me.  My only hope is you.  Join me like you were meant to, Annie, and you will make Alexi proud to have been your brother.” 

            “How dare you!”  I yelled.  My temples were aflame.  “How dare you use Alexi as a tool for your own gain!  How dare you speak of him like that!  I will never help you, Adia.  So there! You have nothing to live for now!  Die like the deaths you’ve caused!”

            “You don’t mean that,” Adia interpreted quickly.  “You will help me, Annie.  And you know perfectly well that the Second Great Manifestation was supposed to protect Alexi!  Not harm him or anybody else, including my own parents!”

I held up my hand.  “It doesn’t matter.  The Second Great Manifestation failed, and you’re to blame.  Was it supposed to protect Alexi?  Yes, but it didn’t.  Not only are you responsible for those deaths, but you also gave your Dreamtrapper of a husband the Newcomer’s identity.  You’re responsible for Alexi’s death!”

Adia tried to protest, but I went on despite her.  “All of your attempts to do anything and everything have failed, Adia.  Now it’s up to me, and me alone, to keep Alexi safe.  How can I make my brother proud, you wonder?  By keeping him safe, that’s how!  And safe means away from you and your dangerous, selfish, cowardice!” 

Leaning back in my chair, I sipped my coffee.  Though I wouldn’t have thought it impossible, my beverage had become even colder.  Placing the mug on the table, I found my feet.  “Goodbye,” I said with finality.  “I never want to see you again.” 

Passing Adia, my arm was suddenly seized in her grip.  Our eyes met.  Hers were pleading.  “I consider you my child, Annie,” she said.  “You’re my baby.  Don’t leave me with nothing, Annie!  I need you!”

My gaze was fastened to hers and unflinching.  “Yes,” I replied.  “You do need me, but I don’t need you.  And unfortunately for you I already have a mother.  Now, if you’ll let go of me, I’m going home to look after my baby.  You know – the one whose death you’re not responsible for.” 

Adia was breathing fire.  How quickly her features had gone from pitiful to terrifying.  “Happy birthday,” she spat, her hand still grasping my arm.  “You said it was the big three zero tomorrow, didn’t you?”

“Yup!”  I said. 

Adia smiled.  “It’s all downhill from there, Annie.  Your happiness already has a timer attached.” 

I stared at her for second. 

Then I wrenched my arm free. 

And I walked from the room. 

 

 

On Hiatus - 7/14/12 - 8:49pm

 


The Dreamdrifter series books IN THE WAKE OF A DREAM and DREAMDRIFTER are temporarily unavailable as of right now in either eBook or paperback format.  I’m editing and retooling a tad to make them better, sexier books!  Nothing smutty, though, don’t worry.  Dreamdrifters exist to help the subconscious well being of others, not the conscious carnal well being of others ; )

 

Both books will be available again in the autumn, and when they are re-released as eBooks the paperback version of DREAMDRIFTER will also finally be released…at last!

 

In the meantime the Dreamdrifter series short story COLOR MY CATCHER will remain available and FREE at Smashwords.  If you haven't read it yet READ IT.  Download it like right now...I'm serious, RIGHT NOW!

 

Thank you for your patience while I edit.

 

And have a good summer : )